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I got a lot of negative feedback on the porch and it's floorboards. So, I tried taking it out and patching up the space it left behind.
If you think it's an improvement, let me know!
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If you think it's an improvement, let me know!
As part of the AniMangaFeedbackClub we encourage feedback on each others' work. Please support our members by visiting this deviation: fav.me/d2x9445
Prints available: akaneart.com/product/pink-girl…
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I like the texture of the trees and grass. I also really like the design of her outfit. The details on her fan and obi look great! However, I think the kimono needs a little more shading to make it look three-dimensional. Also, the pond looks a little too much like a mirror in the middle of a ground than it does a pond. I'd say make the reflection more rippled and give it a few shines of light, and it'll look more like water. I hope this helps.
I'd be interested to see what this looked like with the porch (since this is the only version I've seen).
I'd be interested to see what this looked like with the porch (since this is the only version I've seen).