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Kiki Background Changes

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I got a lot of negative feedback on the porch and it's floorboards. So, I tried taking it out and patching up the space it left behind.

If you think it's an improvement, let me know! :)

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I like the texture of the trees and grass. I also really like the design of her outfit. The details on her fan and obi look great! However, I think the kimono needs a little more shading to make it look three-dimensional. Also, the pond looks a little too much like a mirror in the middle of a ground than it does a pond. I'd say make the reflection more rippled and give it a few shines of light, and it'll look more like water. I hope this helps.

I'd be interested to see what this looked like with the porch (since this is the only version I've seen).